Haiku
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Topic: Haiku
Posted By: dwouncmd
Subject: Haiku
Date Posted: December-10-2014 at 12:59am
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My 11 year old is learning about haiku. He had to write a couple of poems today. I asked him to think about something that was important to him or had made an impression, and write about that. Describe the setting, the action and the feeling. Here is the result: Warm sun, flat water. Skiing behind our Nautique. Adrenaline rush.  ------------- http://www.correctcraftfan.com/diaries/details.asp?ID=6535&sort=&pagenum=2" rel="nofollow - 89 SN <a href="http://www.correctcraftfan.com/diaries/details.asp?ID=6567&sort=&pagenum=1" rel="nofollow">7 |
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Posted By: Waterdog
Date Posted: December-10-2014 at 8:35am
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Wayne, So true!  ------------- - waterdog - http://www.correctcraftfan.com/diaries/details.asp?ID=3896&sort=&pagenum=2&yrstart=1978&yrend=1978" rel="nofollow - 78 Ski Tique |
Posted By: Hollywood
Date Posted: December-10-2014 at 3:53pm
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Nice Haiku, kid. Warm winter day. Coors Light. ------------- |
Posted By: dwouncmd
Date Posted: December-10-2014 at 4:48pm
Nice, but should be 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables. I imagine the Coors makes it sound right regardless. I have this kicking around in my head today: Loud Pipes Throttle open wide, Wind and water stealing sound, The rumble echos back. ------------- http://www.correctcraftfan.com/diaries/details.asp?ID=6535&sort=&pagenum=2" rel="nofollow - 89 SN <a href="http://www.correctcraftfan.com/diaries/details.asp?ID=6567&sort=&pagenum=1" rel="nofollow">7 |
Hollywood wrote:Posted By: Hollywood
Date Posted: December-10-2014 at 5:57pm
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Hey! It's my Haiku. Here's another. Very nice Haiku, kid. Warm and sunny winter day. Crushing those Coors Lights. ------------- |
Posted By: The Godfather
Date Posted: December-10-2014 at 9:13pm
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