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The Godfather 
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 Topic: HaikuPosted: December-10-2014 at 9:13pm |
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Jbear, said to me wow if it was'nt for this site we would never had met for this to happen....
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Hollywood
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Posted: December-10-2014 at 5:57pm |
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Hey! It's my Haiku.
Here's another. Very nice Haiku, kid. Warm and sunny winter day. Crushing those Coors Lights. |
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dwouncmd
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Posted: December-10-2014 at 4:48pm |
Nice, but should be 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables. I imagine the Coors makes it sound right regardless. I have this kicking around in my head today: Loud Pipes Throttle open wide, Wind and water stealing sound, The rumble echos back. |
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Hollywood
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Posted: December-10-2014 at 3:53pm |
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Nice Haiku, kid.
Warm winter day. Coors Light. |
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Waterdog
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Posted: December-10-2014 at 8:35am |
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Wayne, So true! 
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Posted: December-10-2014 at 12:59am |
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My 11 year old is learning about haiku. He had to write a couple of poems today. I asked him to think about something that was important to him or had made an impression, and write about that. Describe the setting, the action and the feeling. Here is the result:
Warm sun, flat water. Skiing behind our Nautique. Adrenaline rush. 
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